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Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

It is good to know that you have a lot of reasons to smile since many things make you smile.

As they say, though we are confronted with a lot of problems, we still have to find a reason to smile.
Even though the simplest thing would make us smile.

Thanks for making me smile also today Ms. [이름].
Enjoy the rest of the day and take care!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

What things always make you smile?

There are many things make me smile.

>>  There are many things that make me smile.
 Let me list some of them.
>>  correct!
First, Drinking coffee while talking to my close friends.

>>  correct! 
 When I am with them and enjoy the time, everystress is gone.
>>  When I am with them while enjoying my time, every stress is gone.
Second, Having dinner with my family.

>>  correct!
I hadn\'t known that being withe family made me smile before living alone.
 >> I did not know that being with my family would make me smile before I started to live alone.  

Having conversations that we had outside and cheer up each other make me smile.

>>  Having conversations while outside or cheering each other up, make me smile too.
 Thired, Playing my puupies while watching TV makes me smile.
  >> Third, playing with my puppies while watching TV makes me smile.

I don\'t usually have time to be with the puppies. 
>> I don\'t usually have time to be with my puppies.        

When I see them being with me, I can feel they are also happy.
>> When I see them being with me, I can feel that they are also happy.

Eventhough we can not talk to each other, we can feel the love.
 >> correct!

Lastly, When I see my students laugh, it maks me smile.
>>       correct! (makes)  

It is a really hard work but I cant not leave this job maybe because of this!!
 >>  It is really a  hard work but I cannot leave this job maybe because of this!!

I notice that while i\'m writing this essay maybe people who I love around me make really smile.

>> I noticed that while I\'m writing this essay maybe people whom I love around me make me really smile.