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2012-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Jane Hard to make a time for homework I think I am not too busy like celebrities. But I don't know why I feel so busy. I would try to be diligent again! Anyway, are you feel okay today?I hope you are okay now~! below are my homework Fill in the blanks with the following words: agenda attend combination positive propose MEMO TO: All Staff FROM: Don Jones Re: Staff Meeting This is just to remind everyone about the __agenda___ for the meeting on Friday. The meeting will be a _combination____ of briefing and brainstorming session. Please come prepared to _propose____ ideas for reorganizing the office. And remember that we want to maintain a _positive____ atmosphere in the meeting. We won't criticize any idea you share. All staff members are expected to _attend____ the meeting.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I really appreciate your effort in doing this homework. I know that you are very busy and it\'s really difficult for your to find time for this. Because of that, I can say that you\'re still a diligent man. Don\'t push yourself too hard, okay? Chill out! Take care and have a productive day! T. JanE ^^ Hi, Jane>> Correct  Hard to make a time for homework >> It\'s hard to find time for my homework. I think I am not too busy like celebrities. >> Correct  But I don\'t know why I feel so busy.>> Correct  I would try to be diligent again! >> Correct  Anyway, are you feel okay today? >> Anyway, are you feeling okay today? I hope you are okay now~!>> Correct  below are my homework>> Below are the answers to my homework. Fill in the blanks with the following words:agenda attend combination positive proposeMEMOTO: All StaffFROM: Don JonesRe: Staff MeetingThis is just to remind everyone about the __agenda___ for the meeting on Friday. >> Correct  The meeting will be a _combination____ of briefing and brainstorming session. >> Correct  Please come prepared to _propose____ ideas for reorganizing the office. >> Correct  And remember that we want to maintain a _positive____ atmosphere in the meeting. >> Correct  We won\'t criticize any idea you share. All staff members are expected to _attend____ the meeting. >> Correct  

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