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2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. You always made my student page and you give brave through your message to me. I appreciate for that. Anyway today's my homework is "Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "A zoo has no useful purpose." I think that everthing of the world has a reason. Of curse a zoo exist also has a reason. In order to education of childeren or protect animals. In addition, some public park give people peaceful daily. I think a zoo also is a good place for taking rest for people. So I don't agree this topic. It's almost approaching Friday. Wow. Good night. See you tomorrow.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. See you later^^ ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^You always made my student page and you give brave through your message to me. >> You always encourage me through your messages on my student page.I appreciate for that. >> I appreciate that.Anyway today\'s my homework is \"Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? \"A zoo has no useful purpose.\">>  CORRECT^^I think that everthing of the world has a reason. Of curse a zoo exist also has a reason. In order to education of childeren or protect animals.>> I think that everything in the world has a reason. Of course a zoo exist for a reason. In order to educate children and on how to protect animals.In addition, some public park give people peaceful daily. >>  In addition, some public parks give people a peaceful day. I think a zoo also is a good place for taking rest for people.>> I think zoo is also a good place to take a rest.So I don\'t agree this topic.>> So, I don\'t agree with this statement.It\'s almost approaching Friday. Wow. >> I\'s almost Friday. Wow.Good night. See you tomorrow. >> correct^^

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