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2017-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I think good friend's personality trait to consider is care I have met a various of friend And I knew consideration is most important I hope to be me that Thank you [이름]

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Hi [이름]!^^

I am happy to see your name again here in the composition board. I love your dedication to learn. Keep up the good work!

~Kelly^^

I think good friend\'s personality trait to consider is care

>> I think, a friend\'s good personality trait is being caring.
I have met a various of friend 

>> I have met various friends.
And I knew consideration is most important

>> I know that it is important to be considerate.

I hope to be me that.

>> I hope to be more considerate to others.
Thank you

>> Thank you!

Bye

>> Bye.

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