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My job is very good. Because I could meet many person about shooting federation and I could eat a lot of food
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My job is very good. Because I could meet many person about shooting federation and I could eat a lot of food.
>> My job is very good because I get to meet many people from the shooting federation, and I have the opportunity to enjoy a wide variety of delicious food.
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