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As I get order, I don\'t expect a birthday.
But I want people to remember my birthday.
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Happy morning, Emily! I would agree with you! As we age, we want to just make things simple on our birthday. See you in a while!-Faith-
As I get order, I don\'t expect a birthday.>> As I get order, I don\'t expect a birthday party.
But I want people to remember my birthday.
But I want people to remember my birthday.
>> But, I want people to remember my birthday.
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