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Essay: What is the one gadget that you could not live without?
Why?
When I could not live without,I need to robot who build my house.
Because,I need my big house for live.
I will live with robot so I won't loney.
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Essay: What is the one gadget that you could not live without? Why?
When I could not live without,I need to robot who build my house.
>> I need a robot to build my house.
Because,I need my big house for live.
>> Because I need a big house.
I will live with robot so I won\'t loney.
>> I could live with a robot, so I won\'t be lonely.
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