Homo sapiens

Hello there, [이름]!

Welcome back!

It\'s been a while since you did your homework.

I guess you liked this topic, huh? ^^

Thanks for doing your homework.

I agree with what you said about beauty contests.

I\'m not fond of them too.

I think it\'s just a lame excuse to objectify women.

Please review my corrections below.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

Basically, I like to see women\'s beautiful bodies.

>> CORRECT!

I CANNOT resist it.

>> CORRECT!

Whenever I see a beautiful woman on the street, I can find my eyes to follow her shape or I glance sideways at her body so that no one knows. -.-; 

>> Whenever I see a beautiful woman on the street, I find myself following her with my gaze or glancing sideways at her so that no one will notice.
 However, ironically, I hate beauty contests because they make me come to think of butcher shop.

>> Ironically, I hate beauty contests because they remind me of a butcher shop.

There is no dignity of human beings in the beauty contests.

>> There is no dignity for humans in beauty contests.
 I guess we might have to be dominated by instinct, that is to say id.

>> I guess we are dominated by our instinct; our id.

But we are human beings, not animals.

>> CORRECT!

As long as we have consciousness, we try to live more humanized.

>> As long as we have self-consciousness, we should try to live more humanized.