Homowork
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello:D thank you for give me the homework. I will study English during commute to my office
Anyway I think The office is organization so we always have to communicate with each other. I don’t know about my work while working so we have to ask to each other and than we can resolve the problem
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for taking your time in answering your homework. I agree with you that communication is important in the office. Keep it up and see you again tomorrow!
-T. Julia
Anyway I think The office is organization so we always have to communicate with each other.
>> Anyway, I think the office is an organization, so we always have to communicate with each other.
I don’t know about my work while working so we have to ask to each other and than we can resolve the problem.
>> There are times that I don\'t know about my work while working, so we have to ask each other, and then we can resolve the problem.
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