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1.
I like to play online games and mobile games.
And I often play games.
Nowadays, I have played a game called \'Gwent : The Witcher game\'.
Which is a card game.
The game needs to have wits and psychological warfare.
And in the end, the player with the highest score wins.
Finally, I like games that have good balance.
2.
I think the advantages are playing video games make you to relieve stress.
And games can do impossible things in reality but it can be abused.
I think if we could make a division between game and reality, it is okay.
The disadvantaes are playing video games can you make game addiction.
Therefore, we must think games are just games.
The Korean government is trying to stop people playing games.
This is a very foolish idea.
The Korean government always tries to take responsibility for games when something happens.
강사 첨삭
Thank you An!
~Lucy
And I often play games.
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays, I have played a game called \'Gwent : The Witcher game\'.
Nowadays, I have played a game called \'Gwent : The Witcher game\'.
>>CORRECT!
Which is a card game.
Which is a card game.
>>CORRECT!
The game needs to have wits and psychological warfare.
The game needs to have wits and psychological warfare.
>>CORRECT!
And in the end, the player with the highest score wins.
And in the end, the player with the highest score wins.
>>CORRECT!
Finally, I like games that have good balance.
Finally, I like games that have good balance.
>>CORRECT!
I think the advantages are playing video games make you to relieve stress.
I think the advantages are playing video games make you to relieve stress.
>>I think the advantages are playing video games help you to relieve stress.
And games can do impossible things in reality but it can be abused.
>>CORRECT!
I think if we could make a division between game and reality, it is okay.
I think if we could make a division between game and reality, it is okay.
>>CORRECT!
The disadvantaes are playing video games can you make game addiction.
The disadvantaes are playing video games can you make game addiction.
>>The disadvantaes are playing video games makes addicted.
Therefore, we must think games are just games.
>>CORRECT!
The Korean government is trying to stop people playing games.
The Korean government is trying to stop people playing games.
>>CORRECT!
This is a very foolish idea.
This is a very foolish idea.
>>CORRECT!
The Korean government always tries to take responsibility for games when something happens.
The Korean government always tries to take responsibility for games when something happens.
>>CORRECT!
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