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Everyone can have their own business.
But most of them can’t make a lot of money.
Business is adventure.
It should be followed lucky with their talent.
If you have excellent skill than others have.
You should try it. But generally you had better get a job using your skill.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]ny!
I would like to give you additional information about EVERYONE vs ANYONE ;
Everyone” refers to every one of the group of people you are talking about. “Anyone” refers to any one particular individual out of the group of people you are talking about. Let\'s talk about that when you get back.
T. Aki~
Everyone can have their own business.
>> CORRECT!
>>> Anyone can have their own business.
But most of them can’t make a lot of money.
>>> CORRECT!
Business is adventure.
>>> Business is an adventure.
It should be followed lucky with their talent.
>>> CORRECT!
If you have excellent skill than others have.
>>> If you have more excellent skills than others.
You should try it. But generally you had better get a job using your skill.
>>> You should try it. But generally, you had better get a job using your skills.
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