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2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi there again, Jessie. I've done two works at the same time if I'm done this. haha! And you're right! "Better late than never." Right? kkk But you know, I'll not be late tommrow. (Please god, help me!) Then, see you and let's talk in the morning. :) <Essay> Wow, how did you know that the tax on cigarettes is going to be higher soon in Korea? I guess you got information from your other students, right? Anyway, imposing high tax on cigarettes will be one of effective ways to make smokers quit smoking, I think. They also will think it's a stupid thing to buy that expensive cigarettes, so will stop smoking or reduce smoking. If they have a brain, they'll try at least!

강사 첨삭


Good morning!
You weren\'t late a while ago so I\'m very happy.
I know that you can wake up earlier. Just keep on disciplining yourself. ^^
Well, yup! I actually got the information from my other students.
I do hope that it will be an effective way to reduce smokers in your country.
See you on Friday!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there again, Jessie.
>> Correct!

I\'ve done two works at the same time if I\'m done this. haha!
>> I\'ve done two works at the same time if I\'m done with this. haha!
And you\'re right!

>> Correct!
\"Better late than never.\"

>> Correct!
Right? kkk

>> Correct!
But you know, I\'ll not be late tommrow. (Please god, help me!)
>>
But you know, I\'ll not be late tomorrow. (Please God, help me!)
Then, see you and let\'s talk in the morning. :)

>> Correct!
 <Essay>
Wow, how did you know that the tax on cigarettes is going to be higher soon in Korea?
>> Correct!
OR>>
Wow, how did you know that the tax on cigarettes is going to increase soon in Korea?
I guess you got information from your other students, right?
>> Correct!
Anyway, imposing high tax on cigarettes will be one of effective ways to make smokers quit smoking, I think.
>>
Anyway, imposing high tax on cigarettes will be one of the effective ways to make smokers quit smoking, I think.
They also will think it\'s a stupid thing to buy that expensive cigarettes, so will stop smoking or reduce smoking.
>>
They will also think that it\'s a stupid thing to buy expensive cigarettes, so they will stop smoking or reduce smoking.
If they have a brain, they\'ll try at least!
>>
If they have a brain, they\'ll at least try.

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