Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you ever committed a small crime before? Answer in a short paragraph.
--> Yes, I have. When I go out to have lunch with my colleagues, I have crossed the street ignoring traffic lights. I think I often committed this crime until now. As I answer this homework question, I realize that I did that offense so easily. From now on, I will try not to do.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Bo Im!
I am so glad to see you here on the composition page! Your sentences below are concise and correct. I think that if you can make basic sentences, you can also do the more complex ones. So keep sending me your written answers no matter how short they are. Soon enough, you will be able to expand these structures into more elaborate structures.
Excellent start! See you later in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
When I go out to have lunch with my colleagues, I have crossed the street ignoring traffic lights.
>> Correct!
I think I often committed this crime until now.
>> Correct!
As I answer this homework question, I realize that I did that offense so easily.
>> Correct!
From now on, I will try not to do.
>> From now on, I will try not to do it.
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