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2022-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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I won\'t, because they don\'t have deep experience on politics. They just know about how can be popular in society. So, if anyone who is actress like a star, I won\'t vote him of her.

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Hi, [이름] Su!
Thank you for doing your homework. Let\'s talk more about this during the lesson. See you. 
-T. Caitlyn
I won\'t, because they don\'t have deep experience on politics. 
>> I won\'t vote for them because they don\'t have extensive experience when it comes to politics. 
They just know about how can be popular in society.
>> People just know them because they are popular.
So, if anyone who is actress like a star, I won\'t vote him of her.
>> So, if an actress or a star runs for politics, I won\'t vote for him or her.

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