Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
My main goal in my company is becoming a specialist in my field.
I think it is not important to get a promotion. It comes naturally, if I try to become a specialist.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Chris!
Thank you so much for sending me your homework. I know how dedicated you are to your job. I hope you can inspire more people.
See you later in class. ^^
~Teacher ERIN
My main goal in my company is becoming a specialist in my field.
>>My main goal in my company is to become a specialist in my field.
I think it is not important to get a promotion.
>>I think it is not vital to get a promotion.
It comes naturally, if I try to become a specialist.
>>It comes naturally if I try to become a professional.
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