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1. I exactly like listening to music before go to bed. so, I had wanted to setup a small audio in our bedroom. but I diden\'t. because I have to go to bed early to get a lot of sleep.
2. I have a rule to clean my bedroom or my house. I regularly clean my house once or twice in 3 days. However, if it is messy, I tend to clean it right away. When I was worked before, I helped my wife to clean our house in weekend. But these days, my wife is so busy to study. so I am mainly cleaning our house with take care my daughter.
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Hello, [이름]! I also liked listening to music before sleeping when I was young. However, I didn\'t have any audio systems before, so what I did was just play some music on my phone until I fell asleep. Those were some good times. Also, based on your answer, you are hardworking and a very family-oriented person. I\'m pretty sure once your daughter goes into daycare, you\'ll be able to get a job related to your major because, as I can see, you are industrious. Thanks for completing your homework! See you in our class!
~T. Jade^^
1. Is there a particular piece of furniture or type of item that you feel is missing from your bedroom setup? If so, what is it, or what are they?
~T. Jade^^
1. Is there a particular piece of furniture or type of item that you feel is missing from your bedroom setup? If so, what is it, or what are they?
I exactly like listening to music before go to bed.
>> I exactly like listening to music before going to bed.
>> OR: I really enjoy listening to music before going to bed.
>> OR: I really enjoy listening to music before going to bed.
so, I had wanted to setup a small audio in our bedroom.
>> So, I wanted to set up a small audio system in our bedroom.
but I diden\'t. because I have to go to bed early to get a lot of sleep.
>> But I didn\'t because I have to go to bed early to get a lot of sleep.
2. Do you have a specific routine for keeping your bedroom clean, or do you clean it whenever it starts to get messy?
I have a rule to clean my bedroom or my house.
>> Correct
>> OR: I have a rule when I clean my bedroom or my house.
I regularly clean my house once or twice in 3 days.
>> I regularly clean my house once or twice every three days.
However, if it is messy, I tend to clean it right away.
>> Correct
When I was worked before, I helped my wife to clean our house in weekend.
>> When I worked before, I helped my wife clean our house on weekends.
>> OR: When I was working before, I helped my wife clean our house during the weekends.
>> OR: When I was working before, I helped my wife clean our house during the weekends.
But these days, my wife is so busy to study.
>> But these days, my wife is too busy studying.
so I am mainly cleaning our house with take care my daughter.
>> So I am mainly cleaning our house and taking care of my daughter.
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