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(Q) What are the things you need to consider when planning a get-together with your friends?
(A) When I get meeting with my friends, I usually consider preparing some food and drinks.
Sometimes I like inviting my friends at my home and we enjoy talking to each other while eating pre made food and drinks.
For a comfortable a get-together, I think it is important to eat and talk so I consider this for meetings.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
I am glad to see that you found time for you to do your homework :)
It\'s really fun to invite people into our house, not only you, but even the house itself becomes warm and cozy :)
Have a good time always.
Aki~
When I get meeting with my friends, I usually consider preparing some food and drinks.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I usually prepare some food and drinks when I meet my friends.
Sometimes I like inviting my friends at my home and we enjoy talking to each other while eating pre made food and drinks.
>>> Sometimes I like inviting my friends to my home and we enjoy talking to each other while eating pre-made food and drinks.
For a comfortable a get-together, I think it is important to eat and talk so I consider this for meetings.
>>> For a comfortable a get-together, I think it is important to eat and talk so I consider this for meetings.
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