Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
When i went to the library I saw the book dangling so I grab the book.The book was about hero\'s but when they were kids.even when they were kids they had willpower and
Maturity.then I read the book!I fell into a world i became a supergirl.
The End
Chapter 1
강사 첨삭
[이름],
That\'s so creative of you! I want to hear the next chapter on our next class. ^^
Please check the corrections. :)
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
When i went to the library I saw the book dangling so I grab the book.
>> When I went to the library, I saw a book dangling, so I grabbed it.
The book was about hero\'s but when they were kids.
>> It was about heroes, but when they were still kids.
even when they were kids they had willpower and Maturity.
>> Even as children, they showed incredible willpower and surprising maturity.
then I read the book!I fell into a world i became a supergirl.
>> I started reading, and suddenly, I was pulled into their world… I became a supergirl!
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