Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
I was near a school so I went in there.I saw a student\'s doing a class so I went in there and did the class.the students were [looming] near me and said can you wait for bit we have to [finish somthing off]so I waited
So I said than I will wait doing a [prep].so I waited than I saw one hole the [depth] were like kinda deep so I didn\'t go near because it\'s essential I don\'t wanna die...........ahahahahahah!!!!!!.....I think for...a..second....today...the......school...is...
goinig somwhere ...so.theres .no.teacher..and..students are supposed to be here
강사 첨삭
[이름],
That was entertaining! (And a little scary!) Hahaha! The character didn’t realize she was alone right away? ^^ What a twist!
Anyway, please take a moment to check today’s corrections. Also, just a quick reminder: “Prep” from our lesson yesterday refers to a student who is around 5 or 6 years old, typically in the year after kindergarten. But in your sentence, “prep” was short for preparation.
Looking forward to more of your creative stories!
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I was near a school so I went in there.
>> I was near a school, so I went inside.
I saw a student\'s doing a class so I went in there and did the class.
>> I saw some students having class, so I joined them.
the students were [looming] near me and said can you wait for bit we have to [finish somthing off]so I waited
>> They were looming near me and said, “Can you wait a bit? We have to finish something off.” So I waited.
So I said than I will wait doing a [prep].
Then I said, “I’ll wait while doing some prep.”
so I waited than I saw one hole the [depth] were like kinda deep so I didn\'t go near because it\'s essential
>> As I waited, I saw a hole—the depth looked really deep, so I didn’t go near it because it’s essential to stay safe.
I don\'t wanna die...........ahahahahahah!!!!!!.....
>> I don’t want to die… ahahahaha!
I think for...a..second....today...the......school...is...
goinig somwhere ...so.theres .no.teacher..and..students are supposed to be here
>> I thought for a second… maybe today the school is going somewhere, because there’s no teacher, and the students are just supposed to be here.
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