Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
. I digestion a bad thing for my help
2. If you wanna buy somthing is affordable to have money
3.My mom is doing diet
4. Carrot is good for my health crisis
5. If somthing dies theres fungus
6. My uncle is a experts at playing games
7. If you are voting we follow most majority things
8.your work will be published
9.Iam writing a journal
10.carrot has nourishment that is good for your eyes
11.You might be infected
12. Carrots havenutrients
13. Plants need soil
14. The brid poop was wiped out from my car
15.I had toaddress the problem
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Nice try!
Just a reminder:
When you do your homework, make sure you study how to use the words first. :D And please use proper punctuation marks in sentences.
Remember: digestion is a natural and necessary process. It’s how your body breaks down food and absorbs nutrients. Saying it’s “bad for your health” sounds unusual unless you’re talking about a specific digestive problem. Indigestion (also called upset stomach) is when you feel uncomfortable after eating. It can include: Stomach pain or burning, Feeling too full or bloated, Nausea or burping.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
. I digestion a bad thing for my help
- Indigestion is bad for my health.
2. If you wanna buy somthing is affordable to have money
- If you want to buy something affordable, you need to have money.
3.My mom is doing diet
- My mom is on a diet.
4. Carrot is good for my health crisis
- Carrots help support my body in a health crisis.
5. If somthing dies theres fungus
- When something dies, fungus grows.
6. My uncle is a experts at playing games
- My uncle is an expert at playing games.
7. If you are voting we follow most majority things
- If we vote, we usually follow the majority.
8.your work will be published
- Your work will be published.
9.Iam writing a journal
- I am writing a journal.
10.carrot has nourishment that is good for your eyes
- Carrots have nourishment that is good for your eyes.
11.You might be infected
- CORRECT.
12. Carrots havenutrients
- Carrots have nutrients.
13. Plants need soil
- Plants need soil.
14. The brid poop was wiped out from my car
- The bird poop was wiped out.
15.I had toaddress the problem
- I had to address the problem.
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