Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
What has been your favorite toy of all time? Tell me in as much detail as you can.
Nero is a doll I used to have when I was 0years old and I still have her now with out her I can\'t sleep without her with her I have lot of memories with my family\'s to I will be so sad with out her.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Great effort! Just watch your grammar and spelling—you\'re expressing your ideas clearly. Keep it up!
~Trixia
CONTENT:
Nero is a doll I used to have when I was 0years old and I still have her now with out her I can\'t sleep without her with her I have lot of memories with my family\'s to I will be so sad with out her.
>> Nero is a doll I’ve had since I was a baby, and I still have her today. Without her, I can’t sleep. She’s always been by my side. I have so many memories with her and my family. I would be really sad without her.
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