Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
Iconic
Declining
Excellent
Scene
Kim Jong Kook’s name has been associated with workout and big muscles. He is an excellent example of someone who has turned his weakness into strength. Jong Kook had a weak back when he was younger and he was in constant pain. That’s why he got into exercise. He wanted to make his body stronger. Even now, he does everything to protect his health. He eats a proper diet every day to make sure that he gets all the nutrients that he needs. He is an excellent and he can prepare healthy and at the same time, delicious dishes. He has become iconic in the variety declining. I don’t see his popularity scene anytime soon.
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CONTENT:
Kim Jong Kook’s name has been associated with workout and big muscles. He is an excellent example of someone who has turned his weakness into strength. Jong Kook had a weak back when he was younger and he was in constant pain. That’s why he got into exercise. He wanted to make his body stronger. Even now, he does everything to protect his health. He eats a proper diet every day to make sure that he gets all the nutrients that he needs. He is an excellent and he can prepare healthy and at the same time, delicious dishes.
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He has become iconic in the variety declining.
>> He has become iconic in the variety scene.
I don’t see his popularity scene anytime soon.
>> I don’t see his popularity declining anytime soon.
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