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Since playing golf is quite difficult, sometimes I feel frustrated. However, through this experience, I have developed my patience and self-control, which also helps improve relationships with my coworkers.
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Good morning, Ho [이름]!
Indeed, engaging in sports develops certain characteristics in us that we can also apply to our social interactions.
Thank you for going the extra mile in this class. Have a good day!
T. Aki~
Since playing golf is quite difficult, sometimes I feel frustrated.
>>> CORRECT!
However, through this experience, I have developed my patience and self-control, which also helps improve relationships with my coworkers.
>>> CORRECT!
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