Homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
students should wear unforms becouse so the no students will get buloied
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Excellent effort! You gave a meaningful reason for uniforms. Next time, try adding more detail about how uniforms prevent bullying. For example: “Students should wear uniforms because everyone looks the same, so no one is teased for their clothes.” This will make your writing more convincing and complete.
Please review the corrections. Remember that correct spelling and sentence structure make your ideas more powerful.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
1. students should wear unforms becouse so the no students will get buloied
~ Students should wear uniforms because then no students will get bullied.
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