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Soundproofing is directly related to the quality of life for apartment dwellers. Therefore, our company is dedicated to developing technologies to reduce noise in apartments. For example, we increase the thickness of slabs and incorporate new sound-absorbing materials into the walls.
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Hello there, Ho [이름]!
I agree that soundproofing is very important. not only in apartments but in every establishment around us, where noise can easily affect comfort and privacy. It’s impressive that the company is not only recognizing the issue but also considering it. You know, we hate it when we hear our neighbor fighting, right? Having such kind of commitment to construction shows customer value and care.
I agree that soundproofing is very important. not only in apartments but in every establishment around us, where noise can easily affect comfort and privacy. It’s impressive that the company is not only recognizing the issue but also considering it. You know, we hate it when we hear our neighbor fighting, right? Having such kind of commitment to construction shows customer value and care.
Aki~
Soundproofing is directly related to the quality of life for apartment dwellers.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, our company is dedicated to developing technologies to reduce noise in apartments.
>> CORRECT!
For example, we increase the thickness of slabs and incorporate new sound-absorbing materials into the walls.
>> CORRECT!
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