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2013-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

학생이 쓴 원문

Leaning through experience is great. But It is hard to experience all of things. Also we don't have enough time and money to exprience. So I think that getting knowledge from books is more effective. For example, Though I didn't go all over the world, I already konw culthre and famous place of other country by lots of pictures and essaies. Also, I can learn cooking from books without taking a class in cookery. And I can accumulate a wide range of background knowledge such as sicence, music, history, and philosophy from reading. Therefore,I think knowledge gained from books is more important.

강사 첨삭

Hello, HaNa. Thank you so much for your composition and I really agree to what you have said. Reading and looking at pistures are significant in knowing one\'s culture. So keep reading and see you in class later. Teacher Michelle Leaning through experience is great. >>Correct But It is hard to experience all of things. >>But it is hard to experience all things.Also we don\'t have enough time and money to exprience. >>Also we don\'t have enough time and money to exprience them. So I think that getting knowledge from books is more effective. >>Correct For example, Though I didn\'t go all over the world, I already konw culthre and famous place of other country by lots of pictures and essaies.>>For example, though I didn\'t travel all over the world, I already know the culture and famous places of other countries by looking at lots of pictures and reading essays. Also, I can learn cooking from books without taking a class in cookery. >>CorrectAnd I can accumulate a wide range of background knowledge such as sicence, music, history, and philosophy from reading. >>And I can accumulate a wide range of background knowledge such as Science, Music, History, and Philosophy from reading.Therefore,I think knowledge gained from books is more important. >>Correct

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