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2013-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Essay <Do you agree on annulment or divorce? What is your opinion about this? > There are many couples to get married. In early days after marriage, they need the consideration and patience to each other. Couple will repeat fighting and reconciliation, and finally they will make their promises and cultures themselves. The other way, there are couples finishing marriage. The Couples decide divorce for variety reasons. When they never forgive a partner, can't have any feeling of love, or don't expect to each other anymore, They are getting a divorced. I don't qualify to agree about their determination. Because it is the careful conclusion to break with a partner who was loved as much as they promise lifelong. Some couples live together for their children. I can't tell them what is the better choose. Only i hope that they choose to hurt less and be happy more.

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Hello there! Thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts about your homework. I totally agree with you when you said that breaking up with your partner is a tough decision. Anyway, you did great in your homework you just need to be more careful on constructing long sentences. I\'ll see you on Monday!   Happy weekend!^~^   ~T. Ritchel~   Essay <Do you agree on annulment or divorce? What is your opinion about this? >There are many couples to get married. >> There are many couples who get married. In early days after marriage, they need the consideration and patience to each other. >> During the early stage of the marriage both couples should be considerate and patient. Couple will repeat fighting and reconciliation, and finally they will make their promises and cultures themselves. >> Couples will keep on fighting and reconciling and at the end they will make their promises and nurture themselves.The other way, there are couples finishing marriage. >> On the other side, some couples end up their marriage. The Couples decide divorce for variety reasons. >> The couples decided to divorce for a variety of reasons. When they never forgive a partner, can\'t have any feeling of love, or don\'t expect to each other anymore, They are getting a divorced. >> When they can\'t forgive their partners for what he/she did, they fall out of love or don\'t respect each other anymore that will result to divorce. I don\'t qualify to agree about their determination. >> I am not in any position to agree or not with their decision. >> I am in no position to agree or not with their decision to get divorced.  Because it is the careful conclusion to break with a partner who was loved as much as they promise lifelong. >> Because breaking up with your partner who promised to love you for the rest of your life is a tough decision.Some couples live together for their children. >> CORRECT I can\'t tell them what is the better choose. >> I can\'t give them a better choice. Only i hope that they choose to hurt less and be happy more. >> I only hope that they choose not be hurt and be more happy with their life.

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