Homwork

2014-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Another new day to all of us, Jessie! Ohh, is it already the middle of the week? God...! Other exams are getting closer! I don't like to study, but I hate a test! But... the truth that the winter vacation is almost there makes me exciting! What should I do? Should I be happy for the winter vacation or unhappy for another exam... haha Then see u on the morning! <Essay> This is the matter of preference, isn' it? Some people like a intelligent person and some are not. In my case, I don't care whether a person is itelligent or not. But it is better that has a common sense at least. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your view about it.
Your answer shows what kind of person you are.^_^
Well, I believe that you have to enjoy both of them. ahhaha
Deal with the test and  just think that it will be over soon!
You can do that! I\'ll cheer for you. ^_^ hahaha
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
Another new day to all of us, Jessie!
>> Correct!
OR>> It\'s another new day for all of us, Jessie!
Ohh, is it already the middle of the week?

>> Correct!
God...! Other exams are getting closer!

>> Correct!
I don\'t like to study, but I hate a test!

>> I don\'t like to study and I hate taking a test!
OR>> I don\'t like to study but I have to take a test.
But... the truth that the winter vacation is almost there makes me exciting!

>> But the truth that  winter vacation is almost there makes me excited!
What should I do?

>> Correct!
Should I be happy for the winter vacation or unhappy for another exam... haha

>> Correct!
Then see u on the morning!
>> Then see you in the morning!
<Essay>
This is the matter of preference, isn\' it?

>> This is a matter of preference, isn\'t it?
Some people like a intelligent person and some are not.

>> Some people like an intelligent person and some do not.
In my case, I don\'t care whether a person is itelligent or not.

>> In my case, I don\'t care whether a person is intelligent or not.
But it is better that has a common sense at least. :)

>> But it is better if she has a common sense at least. :)

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