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Good morning!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story to me. ^_^

I enjoyed reading it. What could be the lesson that we can learn from it?

Anyway, please be careful in capitalizing the pronouns in the sentences Ms. [이름].

Please go over the corrections. ^_^

~T. Jessie~

The story of korea is woodcutter and a fairy.

>> One of the stories in Korea is about a woodcutter and a fairy.

A long time ago, a man lived with his mother in village.

>> A long time ago, a man lived with his mother in a village.

He was a woodcutter and He was very poor.

So nobody wanted to get married with him.

>> Correct!

One day, when he went to the mountain to cut firewood, He found that a rabbit was chased by a hunter.

>> One day, when he went to the mountain to cut firewood, he found that a rabbit was being chased by a hunter.

So he rescued the rabbit.

>> Correct!

So the rabbit talked about any secret place.

>> Do you mean: So the rabbit asked about any secret place.

So he went to the place at a full moon night.

When he found three fairy, they were taking a bath at waterfall in forest.

>> Then he saw three fairies, they were taking a bath in the waterfalls in forest.

So he hid a clothes.

>> So he hid some clothes.

OR>> So he hid a fairy\'s clothes.

She was very sad because she could not go to the heaven.

>> She was very sad because she could not go back to heaven.

And she had to get married with the woodcutter.

>> Correct!

But She was very happy with her husband, mother-in-law and two kids.

>> But she was very happy with her husband, mother-in-law and two kids.

One day, she requested to see her fairy clothes once.

So he gave it to her the fairy clothes because he believed her.

>> So he gave it to her because he believed her.

But she wore the clothes and she went to the heaven with her kids .....