homwork
학생이 쓴 원문
COMPOSITION WRITING: Everyone is great at something - write about what you do best. It could be a hobby, a sport, reading, playing chess, or anything else you excel at.
My family is my favorite of the best in the world.
I can't live without my family.
I don't know about jewels and a brand-name bag and anything else.
I only hope that my family will be happy with many years to come.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are getting better. Some reminders:
in the years to come- It means \"at some undetermined time in the future\".
for years to come- It means \"continuing onward into the future from today until an unspecified time years later\".
Teacher Venus^^
My family is my favorite of the best in the world.
>>>My family is the best in the world.
I can\'t live without my family.>>>CORRECT
I don\'t know about jewels and a brand-name bag and anything else.>>>I don\'t know about jewels, branded bags and anything else.
I only hope that my family will be happy with many years to come.
>>>I only hope that my family will be happy for years to come.
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