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학생이 쓴 원문
Happy Thursday, Kelly~~
Thank you for your tips.
I will try our class.
Use the following words in a sentence:
1. mermaids
2. ocean
3. creature
4. beautiful
The mermaids are creature who has beautiful tails and eyes.
They lives in the ocean.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for being open to corrections. Always remember what you have learned, so you will improve more.
Take care~
~t. Kelly^^
Happy Thursday, Kelly~~
>> Correct.
Thank you for your tips.
>> Correct.
I will try our class.
>> I will apply them in our class.
Use the following words in a sentence:
1. mermaids
2. ocean
3. creature
4. beautiful
The mermaids are creature who has beautiful tails and eyes.
>> Mermaids are creatures who have beautiful tails and eyes.
They lives in the ocean.
>> They live in the ocean.
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