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학생이 쓴 원문
1. I try to be a confident person.
2. I think that people cooperate at work.
3 .I envy fluent speaker in English.
4. I couldn`t believe the news that he had a car accident because I saw
him the previous day.
5. She gave up doing exercise recently.
6. In Korea, it was not common for women to have a job in former times.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [Name]! Thank you for dropping by.
I really appreciate the effort. Keep it up!
I will talk to you later.
T. Gracelyn
1. I try to be a confident person.
>>correct
2. I think that people cooperate at work.
2. I think that people cooperate at work.
>>correct
3 .I envy fluent speaker in English.
>>I envy those who are fluent in English.
4. I couldn\'t believe the news that he had a car accident because I saw
him the previous day.
him the previous day.
>>correct
5. She gave up doing exercise recently.
>>correct
6. In Korea, it was not common for women to have a job in former times.
>>In Korea, it was not common for women to have a job in the olden times. (In this sentence, it is more appropriate to use the word olden than former.)
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