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Hi Violet,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
T. Alexia
HOMEWORK:
If you could be any animal what would you be and why? Answer in complete sentences.
ANSWER:
If I can be a animal,then I will be a cat(baby cat).beacause cat is a little bit fast.when I see bad guys,I will get rid of them with my claws.
CORRECTIONS:
If I could be an animal, then I will be a cat(baby cat), because cat is a bit fast. Also, when I see bad guys, I will get rid of them using my claws.
** Violet, please don\'t forget the spacing between words. I have also corrected your grammar like correct punctuation, correct word usage and addition of word.
That\'s all Violet. ^^ Thank you. ^^
Take care.
T. Alexia
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