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2013-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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How do Korean people usully celebrate birthdays? In Korea when they [이름], they throw the party for drink in downtown. When the get old, simple party or pass. Although in person doesn't throw the party but they throw the pary with parents and child.

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Hello^^ I commend you on trying your best expressing your ideas.^^ Please do check and the corrections below. If given that you have questions, feel free to ask it in class. Take care. See you in class. ~~ T. Kristel How do Korean people usully celebrate birthdays?In Korea when they [이름], they throw the party for drink in downtown. >> In Korea when people are [이름], they throw a party downtown. When the get old, simple party or pass. >>When they get older, a simple party can do or simply no celebration.Although in person doesn\'t throw the party but they throw the pary with parents and child. >> They also throw a party with parents and child.

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