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2014-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What do you hate the most? I hate the most when I am being lazy. I feel like I am useless when I am doing nothing! Everybody has same time like 24 hours in a day. Firstly, some people use time wisely. It seems like 48hours in a day. However they are still saying that the time is not enouh for them. Scondly, the others use the time inefevtively. They just s[이름]p and watch tv all the time. They do not try to put effort for themselve to be developed. I really hate myself being lazy like I have always same time. I want to be alive all the time and I want to make myself better even until I die.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Well, it also depends on the person on how do they spend their time.
As what you have mentioned, some people spend their time wisely and it is not enough and some people use waste their time doing nothing.

Maybe you feel like that because you are currently not doing anything but once you start going back to work, I am pretty sure that your 24 hours would not also be enough. Isn\'t it? kkkk

Thanks for your time today and see you again tomorrow!

You take care!


Always.

Kathrine ^^


What do you hate the most?

I hate the most when I am being lazy.

>> correct!
 I feel like I am useless when I am doing nothing!

>> correct! 
 Everybody has same time like 24 hours in a day.

>>  Everybody has same time which is 24 hours  a day.
 Firstly, some people use time wisely.

>> Firstly, some people use their time wisely.

It seems like 48hours in a day.

>> It seems like they have 48 hours a day.
 However they are still saying that the time is not enouh for them.

>> correct! (enough)

>> or: However, they are still saying that time is not yet enough for them.
 Scondly, the others use the time inefevtively. 

>> Secondly, others use their time ineffectively.
 They just s[이름]p and watch tv all the time.

>> correct!
 They do not try to put effort for themselve to be developed.

>> They do not try to put effort to develop themselves.
 I really hate myself being lazy like I have always same time.

>>  I really hate myself being lazy like I have always have the same time.
 I want to be alive all the time and I want to make myself better even until I die.

>> correct!

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