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blue is my favorite colour.it is colour of the sky and the sea. it reminds me a butterfly which is my facorite insect. when i get older i want to have a big family. I like a big family we usually leave at 11 but we are leaving at10.30 today. l like tuesdays,wednesday and friday because weekend starts from friday. Do you have any special thing which changes your life? If you have, what did you learned from that? I used to study at oversea. That experience helps me to change my attitude of life.Before I went to Australia I could not prepare anything by my-self especially food. I did not know how to cook not even how to operating rice cooker because my mother did it for me when I lived with her. Living alone had thought me to be independence and brave. Additionally, I had a part time job while I studied in university. It was very hard time because I had to work and study in the same time. But It was one of meaningful time which I learnt the value of the money.

Hello [이름]! ^ ^ I guess we realize the value of things when we are on our own. It is also during these times that we appreciate those who make our lives easier. : ) This experience did not only enrich you on an academic level but also in a personal and practical level. : ) I would like to remind you to please pay attention to your capitalization, punctuation and spelling; and try to avoid beginning your sentences with the word \"but\". : ) Also, I am curious. How many are you in your family? What made you decide to have a big family in the future? : ) T.Trisha Here are my corrections for you: blue is my favorite colour. >>>Blue is my favorite colour. >>>OR Blue is my favorite color. it is colour of the sky and the sea. >>>It is the color of the sky and the sea. it reminds me a butterfly which is my facorite insect. >>>It reminds me of the butterfly which is my favorite insect. >>>OR It reminds me of the butterfly, my favorite insect.when i get older i want to have a big family. >>>When I get older I want to have a big family. I like a big family >>>I like a big family. >>>OR I would like to have a big family. >>>OR I want a big family.we usually leave at 11 but we are leaving at10.30 today. >>>We usually leave at 11 but we are leaving at 10.30 today.l like tuesdays,wednesday and friday because weekend starts from friday. >>>l like Tuesdays, Wednesdays and Fridays because the weekend starts on Fridays.Do you have any special thing which changes your life? >>>Did any special thing change your life? >>>OR Did you experience any special thing that changed your life? If you have, what did you learned from that? >>>If you have, what did you learn from that?I used to study at oversea. >>>I used to study overseas. That experience helps me to change my attitude of life. >>>That experience helped me change my attitude in life. Before I went to Australia I could not prepare anything by my-self especially food. >>> Before I went to Australia I could not prepare anything by myself, especially food. I did not know how to cook not even how to operating rice cooker because my mother did it for me when I lived with her. >>>I neither knew how to cook nor even how to operate the rice cooker because my mother did it for me when I lived with her. Living alone had thought me to be independence and brave. >>>Living alone taught me to be independent and brave. Additionally, I had a part time job while I studied in university. >>>In addition, I had a part time job while I was studying in university. It was very hard time because I had to work and study in the same time. >>>I had a very hard time because I had to work and study at the same time. >>>OR I had a difficult time because I had to work and study at the same time. >>>OR It was difficult for me because I had to work and study at the same time. But It was one of meaningful time which I learnt the value of the money. >>>However, it was a meaningful time for me because I learned the value of money.