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2017-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What healthy food do you love eating? I love Kimchi stew. Because, it is fermented food so it is good for healthy. And I love mango. I didn't eat a lot of mango so I want to eat it. When I taste mango in Tieland, it was very sweet and soft. So I want to eat mango everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for your homework. When you visit my country, I am going to buy you some mangoes because they are really cheap here.^^ Anyway, have a great day and see you in class.

~t. Kelly^^

What healthy food do you love eating?
I love Kimchi stew.

>> Correct.
Because, it is fermented food so it is good for healthy.
>>
Because it is a fermented food, so it is good for the health.
And I love mango.

>> And I love mangoes.
I didn\'t eat a lot of mango so I want to eat it.

>> Correct.

>> I did not eat lots of mangoes, so I want to eat it.
When I taste mango in Tieland, it was very sweet and soft.

>> When I tasted a mango in Thailand, it was very sweet and soft.
So I want to eat mango everyday.

>> So, I want to eat mangoes every day.

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