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Topic: Is it important to keep up with the latest fashion?

In my opinion, It\'s not important so much.
>>In my opinion, it is not that important.
If I was a woman, maybe it\'s very important to keep up with latest fashion.

>>If I am woman, maybe it\'s very important to keep up with the latest fashion.
That is Instinct of a woman.

>>That\'s woman\'s instinct.
is there a Korea proverb that change of a woman is not guilty.

>>There is a Korean proverb that say, \"Women are not guilty of change.\"
Maybe the word, \"fashion\", means clothing, cosmetics, and accessories.
>>correct

I have no intention of deprecating women.

>>I have no intentions of deprecating women.

That seems rather look more beautiful and lovely.
>>That seems look rather more beautiful and lovely.
If man is so sensitive to the fashion, but rather it may be the subject of scorn.

>>If man is so sensitive to the fashion, but it may be subject to scorn.
I think that men normally do not envy the man sensitive to fashion.

>>I think that men normally do not envy other men, who are sensitive about fashion.

I hope the word, \"fashion\" is interpreted as wider trend, flow of world politics or economy.
>>I hope the word, \"fashion\" is interpreted as a wider trend, related to the world of politics or economy.
I wish this essay will not be seen as narrow-minded thinking about the man and woman.

>>I wish this essay won\'t be seen by a narrow-minded person.