homwwork 8/28: museums (museum (hereafter aalled "MU")
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There are many MU in Korea,
>>correct
It is classified National, Public, Private, Regional MU.
>>It is classified as National, Public, Private, Regional museums.
I don\'t know well numbers of that in Korea.
>>I don\'t know well about the number.
When students, we go mainly for a homework.
>>Student mainly go there for their homework.
I also did so, not voluntary.
>>I also did that when I was a student.
Therefore, I can not remember what i had visited.
>>Therefore, I can\'t remember when was the last time I visited the museum.
Nowadays, When I travel across the country, But now,I voluntarily go to the MU.
>>Nowadays, when I travel across the country, I voluntarily go to MU.
it is a local self-governing era, and, The self-government heads are selected via vote.
>>It is a local and self governing heads are selected via vote.
So they are attempting to attract a festival or MU in the their provinces.
>>So they are attracting festivals or MUs in their provinces.
It is only for re-election, not for citizens and residents.
>>It is only for the re-election for the non-citizens and residence.
Anyway,We can visited a various MU.
>>Anyway, we can visit various MU.
We can easily go to the museum at any time.
>>We can easily go to the museum anytime.
I have been visited many kind of MU.
>>I\'ve visited many kinds of MU.
I approximately have visited following:
>>I have approximately visited the following museums:
- The National MU in Seoul (National)
- Seoul MU of History (Public)
- Gramophone and Edison Science MU(Private)...etc.
>>correct
The most impressive place was Gramophone.
>>correct
I first saw and heard live muvi of IL DIVO, Male 4,famous pop-opera singers in Europe.
>>I saw and heard a live movie of IL DIVO and Male 4, famous pop-opera singers in Europe.
I still remain impressed.
>>I am still impressed until now.
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