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Hi Anny ^^
Well you are on the right track. Doing better every day. Keep up the good work.
Continue working hard and I am very sure you will reach your goals.
T. Lainey <\",)))><
1. At first my parents did not allow me to ever play video games after school, but now they permit it sometimes
>>> correct
2. When you need a gigantic count, it is not okay to estimate
>>> When you need an accurate count, it is not okay to estimate.
3. Alexis was excited to begin her new job, and we were impressed by how eager she was.
>>> correct
4. The actor always wore a mask and covered his face, so it was exciting to see what he looked like when he finally concealed
>>> The actor always wore a mask and hid hid face, so it was exciting to see what he looked like when he finally revealed.
5. The book\'s conclusion was shocking, since I never thought the book would end with a major death.
>>> correct
I so love teacher
>>> I love it so much teacher.
so,I want to study Enghlish hard
>>> I want to study hard with my English subject.
my son was curious about you
>>> correct
I will meet you on Friday
>>> correct
Good bye..
>>> correct
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