Homwwork

2018-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Homwwork 1. At first my parents did not allow me to ever play video games after school, but now they permit it sometimes 2. When you need a gigantic count, it is not okay to estimate 3. Alexis was excited to begin her new job, and we were impressed by how eager she was 4. The actor always wore a mask and covered his face, so it was exciting to see what he looked like when he finally concealed 5. The book's conclusion was shocking, since I never thought the book would end with a major death. I so love teacher so,I want to study Enghlish hard my son was curious about you I will meet you on Friday Good bye..

강사 첨삭

Hi Anny ^^


Well you are on the right track. Doing better every day. Keep up the good work.

Continue working hard and I am very sure you will reach your goals.


T. Lainey <\",)))><


1. At first my parents did not allow me to ever play video games after school, but now they permit it sometimes

>>> correct

 2. When you need a gigantic count, it is not okay to estimate
>>> When you need an accurate count, it is not okay to estimate.
3. Alexis was excited to begin her new job, and we were impressed by how eager she was.

>>> correct

 4. The actor always wore a mask and covered his face, so it was exciting to see what he looked like when he finally concealed
>>> The actor always wore a mask and hid hid face, so it was exciting to see what he looked like when he finally revealed.
5. The book\'s conclusion was shocking, since I never thought the book would end with a major death.

>>> correct


 I so love teacher 

>>> I love it so much teacher.
 so,I want to study Enghlish hard

>>> I want to study hard with my English subject.
 my son was curious about you 

>>> correct
 I will meet you on Friday

>>> correct
 Good bye..

>>> correct

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