homwwork 9/4: If I am planning to buy a new car....

2015-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear teacher Jeny. Extended class from 10 mins to 20 mins was difficult than I thought. sorry! and have a nice weekend. ==== body === In general, Men are very interested in cars, women are interested in bag. Maybe I am not man!. (ha ha ha)I am not much interested in car. In case of me,when I have to go outing with my family, or go to my wife's home far away, or go to play golf, I need only car. if not necessary, I leave my car at home. I prefer an RV (Recreational Vehicle) car. Luxury car or foreign car ? It is not important for me. in my thought, if car could be achieved that purpose, It is sufficient itself. in 2002, the World Cup held in Korea, I bought MUSSO , RV car. I am using well for 14 years. and if there is no special reason, I will retain MUSSO until the end.

강사 첨삭

Hi Oh,

I appreciate your time answering your homework everyday, it means that you are really interested with enhancing your skills in English. Just continue that attitude and you\'ll be successful in the future.

T. Jeny

 

Dear teacher Jeny.
>>correct
Extended class from 10 mins to 20 mins was difficult than I thought.

>>Extended class time from 10 to 20 mins. was difficult than I thought.

sorry! and have a nice weekend.
>>Sorry!! Have a nice weekend.
==== body ===
In general, Men are very interested in cars, women are interested in bag.
>>Generally, men are interested in cars while women are interested in bags.
Maybe I am not man!. (ha ha ha)I am not much interested in car.

>>Maybe I am not a man!. (ha ha ha) I am not interested in cars.

In case of me,when I have to go outing with my family, or go to my wife\'s home far away, or go to play golf, I need only car.

>>In my case, I only use my car whenever I go for a family outing, go out with my wife for a long distance or play golf.
if not necessary, I leave my car at home.
>>correct
I prefer an RV (Recreational Vehicle) car.

>>I prefer a RV (Recreational Vehicle) car.
Luxury car or foreign car ? It is not important for me.

>>Luxury or foreign car? It is not important for me.
in my thought, if car could be achieved that purpose, It is sufficient itself.

>>I think, as long as it will serve it\'s purpose, it\'s sufficient for me.
in 2002, the World Cup held in Korea, I bought MUSSO , RV car.

>>In 2002, the World Cup was hed in Korea, I bought a MUSSO, RV car.
I am using well for 14 years. and

>>I\'ve been using it for 14 years now.
if there is no special reason, I will retain MUSSO until the end.

>>There is no special reason but I will use my MUSSO until the end.

>>There is no special reason but I will use my MUSSO until it lasts.

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