homwwork 9/7:About relying on computers

Hello Oh,

Dear techer Jeny.

>>Dear teacher Jeny,
first of all, I am happy to hear that your daughter is kind and good at school. I hope that she grows prettier well.
>>First of all, I am happy to hear that your daughter is kind and good in school. I hope that she will grow pretty well.
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Before being activated internet, it was analog generation.

>>Before getting activated on the internet, it was an analog generation.
But now, It is digital generation.
>>But now,  it is already the digital generation.
I also rely on computers, such as viewing dictionary, finding knowledge, finding way to go somewhere, and buying the goods I need.
>>I also rely on computers, such as viewing the dictionary, finding knowledge, finding directions, and buying goods that I need.

I only ask the compute what I need to do.
>>I will only ask the computer on what to do.
And, In case of children or students, they like to playing game via computer for a long time.

>>And in case of children or students, they like playing games via computer for a long time.
I think it is not so bad.

>>correct

Many persons worry about that symptom.

>>Many people worry about the effect.
Maybe I think that It is not for children, it is why their children\'s grade down.
>>I think, their grade will be affected, it will go down.
You know, Beatles sings \"\"Let it be me\"\",

>>correct
It is natural phenomenon.
>>It is a natural phenomenon.
Now, Smart phone replaces that computer.

>>Now smart phone is replacing computers.
So smart phone is equal to computer.

>>correct
If they are not harmed their health by that instrument, It will be a usefull tool.

>>If it is not harmful for their health, it will be a useful gadget.
Nowadays age, We can not live if they don\'t have a computer or smart phone.\"

>>Nowadays, we can\'t live without computers and smartphones.