Honesty is the best policy.

2018-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, one fancy sharp pencil was famous for the elementary students. I already had one which my mom had bought for me. But I had lost my sharp pencil. I felt sorry and sad. At that time I saw my brother had lots of money. I was tempted by that money. But my brother is too brilliant to know everything. Eventually I could not steal the money. I think it was good not to steal the money. I would be miserable if I got the sharp pencil with my brother’s money. Honesty gives me comfortable. So honesty is the best policy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thanks for dropping by the board! I haven\'t lost faith in humanity yet so yes, honesty is still the real deal. I\'m glad to know that you didn\'t steal your brother\'s money. You did the right thing. Have a smooth sailing day, see you!

~Teacher Anne


When I was young, one fancy sharp pencil was famous for the elementary students.

>>> When I was young, there was a fancy sharp pencil that was very famous for the elementary students.

>>> When I was young, there was a famous pencil for the elementary students.

I already had one which my mom had bought for me.

>>> Correct!

But I had lost my sharp pencil.

>>> Correct! 

I felt sorry and sad. At that time I saw my brother had lots of money. I was tempted by that money.

>>> I felt sorry and sad at that time, and then I saw that my brother had lots of money, so I was tempted to steal his money.

But my brother is too brilliant to know everything. Eventually I could not steal the money.

>>> Eventually, my brother was too brilliant to know everything so I could not steal the money.  

I think it was good not to steal the money.

>>> I think it is good not to steal money from anyone.  

I would be miserable if I got the sharp pencil with my brother’s money.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: It would be awful to have the famous pencil with my brother\'s money.

Honesty gives me comfortable. So honesty is the best policy.

>>> Honesty makes me feel comfortable, so honesty is the best policy. 

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