Honeybutterchip
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Do you know Honeybutterchip?It tastes really good.And it is very sweet.It is a cracker.Many people love Honeybutterchip.Maybe you will like honeybutterchip too.Actually,I like almost all kinds of chip snack.It tastes really sweet.Does your country sell honeybutterchip?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Good evening. ^^ :)
Honeybutterchip is really delicious. In fact, I like it too.
Here in the Philippines we also have Honeybutterchip. It smells good and the taste is
so ohhh yummy! ^^ :)
hehe..
Well, let us enjoy eating Honeybutterchip.
I will see you in our class, [이름]! ^^
Take care.
~~ Teacher Kris
Do you know Honeybutterchip?
>> Correct
It tastes really good.
>> Correct
OR:
>> It tastes reall delicious.
And it is very sweet.
>> It is also very sweet.
It is a cracker.
>> Correct
Many people love Honeybutterchip.
>> Correct
Maybe you will like honeybutterchip too.
>> Correct
Actually,I like almost all kinds of chip snack.
>> Actually, I like almost all kinds of chip snack.
It tastes really sweet.
>> Correct
Does your country sell honeybutterchip?
>> Correct
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