Honeybutterchip

2015-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Do you know Honeybutterchip?It tastes really good.And it is very sweet.It is a cracker.Many people love Honeybutterchip.Maybe you will like honeybutterchip too.Actually,I like almost all kinds of chip snack.It tastes really sweet.Does your country sell honeybutterchip?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Good evening. ^^ :) Honeybutterchip is really delicious. In fact, I like it too. Here in the Philippines we also have Honeybutterchip. It smells good and the taste is so ohhh yummy! ^^ :) hehe.. Well, let us enjoy eating Honeybutterchip. I will see you in our class, [이름]! ^^   Take care.   ~~ Teacher Kris   Do you know Honeybutterchip? >> Correct It tastes really good. >> Correct OR: >> It tastes reall delicious. And it is very sweet. >> It is also very sweet. It is a cracker. >> Correct Many people love Honeybutterchip. >> Correct Maybe you will like honeybutterchip too. >> Correct Actually,I like almost all kinds of chip snack. >> Actually, I like almost all kinds of chip snack. It tastes really sweet. >> Correct Does your country sell honeybutterchip? >> Correct

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