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I was busy. i like to buy kimbap and eat.
I thank kimbap to be good for my body.
because protein. vegetable . carbohydrate all eat once.
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Happy Friday, Michelle!
I also like eating gimbap, and I agree, it\'s a food that you can buy and eat when you are on the go. However, I also tried making gimbap and I realized it is a lot of work to make, so nowadays, I prefer to just buy it.
- T. Caitlyn
I was busy. i like to buy kimbap and eat.
>> I like to buy kimbap and eat it when I\'m busy.
I thank kimbap to be good for my body. because protein. vegetable . carbohydrate all eat once.
I thank kimbap to be good for my body. because protein. vegetable . carbohydrate all eat once.
>> I think kimbap is good for my body because it contains protein, vegetables, and carbohydrates all at once.
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