HOOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
The main character of the day decide the place wants.
* IS THIS NOT HOMEWORK*
WHAT I WANT TO ASK TO MY TEACHER.....
TODAY WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DAY.
BECAUSE IT SNOWED ALL DAY.
THE WHITE COLOR ALL CHANGED ON THE TREES AND THE WHOLE SEOUL STREETS.
AND MY HEART WAS HAPPY AS I BECOME IS CHILD.
FEELS LIKE CHRSTMAS IS COMING.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Michelle!
I feel very happy that you feel happy today. It\'s nice that you appreciate the beauty of winter. Let\'s talk more about this in class.
- T. Caitlyn
The main character of the day decide the place wants.
>> The main character of the day decides the place they want.
* IS THIS NOT HOMEWORK*
>> The main character of the day decides the place they want.
* IS THIS NOT HOMEWORK*
>> This is not a homework.
WHAT I WANT TO ASK TO MY TEACHER.....
>> What I want to tell my teacher.
TODAY WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DAY BECAUSE IT SNOWED ALL DAY.
TODAY WAS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DAY BECAUSE IT SNOWED ALL DAY.
>> CORRECT
THE WHITE COLOR ALL CHANGED ON THE TREES AND THE WHOLE SEOUL STREETS.
>> The white snow covered all the trees and the entire streets of Seoul.
AND MY HEART WAS HAPPY AS I BECOME IS CHILD.
AND MY HEART WAS HAPPY AS I BECOME IS CHILD.
>> And my heart was happy as I felt like a child again.
FEELS LIKE CHRSTMAS IS COMING.
FEELS LIKE CHRSTMAS IS COMING.
>> It feels like Christmas is coming.
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