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2016-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I did a speech contest but, I can't get an award and prize. So, I was sad and upset, but I determined next time I will get an award and prize for speech contest.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! It been said that failure is a necessary part of life. This can change and shape us into a better person. Don\'t let your failures have negative impact on you. Just keep giving your best shot.   ~Teacher Shanee   I did a speech contest but, I can\'t get an award and prize. >>> I joined a speech contest but I didn\'t get an award or prize. So, I was sad and upset, but I determined next time I will get an award and prize for speech contest. >>> So, I was sad and upset. However, I didn\'t get discouraged. Instead, I became more determined to work harder and win an award or prize next time.

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