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학생이 쓴 원문
My cousin and I usually have a late lunch to avoid the crowded time.
We go to a student restaurant because it's quite cheap.
As if we were students from the school, we went there today as usual.
We had to buy meal tickets on which the price was printed prior to ordering.
After standing in a line, I bought both my cousin's one and mine.
When I got the tickets and turned back, I rubbed them between my two fingers unconsciously.
And it suprisingly became two tickets to four tickets.
What happened?
The guy who sold tickets didn't realize that the other ticket hided behind the other side of each one, because the paper of tickets was too crisp.
So we can have a lunch tomorrow for free by this.
Should I feel guilty?
But we believe that it's the guy's interest in us. :D
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Well I think this is something different.
But it is your own discretion to bring it back or not.
You just need to deal with your conscience. Kk^-^
-Tiny^0^
My cousin and I usually have a late lunch to avoid the crowded time.
>> My cousin and I usually have a late lunch to avoid the crowd.
We go to a student restaurant because it's quite cheap.
>>correctAs if we were students from the school, we went there today as usual.
>>correctWe had to buy meal tickets on which the price was printed prior to ordering.
>>correctAfter standing in a line, I bought both my cousin's one and mine.
>> After standing in a line, I bought both for my cousin and mine.
>> After standing in a line, I bought my cousin’s and mine.
When I got the tickets and turned back, I rubbed them between my two fingers unconsciously.
>>correctAnd it suprisingly became two tickets to four tickets.
>> And surprisingly the two tickets became four tickets.
>>And it surprisingly became four tickets.
>>spelling check: surprisinglyWhat happened?
>>How did that happen?The guy who sold tickets didn't realize that the other ticket hided behind the other side of each one, because the paper of tickets was too crisp.
>> The guy who sold the tickets didn't realize that the other ticket hided behind the other side of the other two tickets, because the paper was too crisp.
So we can have a lunch tomorrow for free by this.
>> So we can have a lunch tomorrow for free with this.
Should I feel guilty?
>>correct ^^(It’s up to you. Ask yourself kk)But we believe that it's the guy's interest in us. :D
>>correct haha!
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