Hope
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, exactly.
I wanted to play the piano when I was younger but I couldn\'t learn it because my parents are not rich also I don\'t have a talent.
The recently, my hope is that would like to visit several cointries.
However, It\'s not easy to achieve that either because of Covid-19.
I\'m getting older too fast.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday Ms. [Name]! Benja[이름] Franklin once said, “Don\'t put off until tomorrow what you can do today.
Aki :)
Yes, exactly.
>>> CORRECT!
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Yes, you are right!
I wanted to play the piano when I was younger but I couldn\'t learn it because my parents are not rich also I don\'t have a talent.
I wanted to play the piano when I was younger but I couldn\'t learn it because my parents are not rich also I don\'t have a talent.
>>> I wanted to learn how to play the pian when I was young but I couldn\'t because my parents cannot afford it and besides I don\'t have any talent.
The recently, my hope is that would like to visit several cointries.
The recently, my hope is that would like to visit several cointries.
>>> Recently, my hope is to visit several countries,
However, It\'s not easy to achieve that either because of Covid-19.
However, It\'s not easy to achieve that either because of Covid-19.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Due to our current situation brought about by the COvid Pandemic, it is not easy to do that either.
I\'m getting older too fast.
I\'m getting older too fast.
>>>CORRECT
OR >>> I am aging hastily.
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