Hope this e-mail could be reivised
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Hello, teacher.
Hope this e-mail could be confirmed whether it's correctly written.
Dear professor 000,
I am [Name] [이름] who took over Narae Kim of AHCI and Academia section, and became charge of Academia section.
I appreciate for your patience of waiting the result of academia section's evaluation in advance.
Pro. 000's paper is decided as 'rejection of publication'.
We'd like to inform that it was decision made according to 'SPACE' academia section's goal and character apart from your academical achievement.
I hope we could meet you in SPACE academia section with another paper in the future.
Thank you.
Jiyoon [이름]
강사 첨삭
HELLO JUNE,
I have checked the e-mail that you have sent. ^^
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hello, teacher.
>>
Hope this e-mail could be confirmed whether it\'s correctly written.
>> Kindly check this e-mail if it\'s correctly written.
Dear professor 000,
>>
I am [Name] [이름] who took over Narae Kim of AHCI and Academia section, and became charge of Academia section.
>> I am [Name] [이름], who took over Narae Kim of AHCI and Academia section.
I appreciate for your patience of waiting the result of academia section\'s evaluation in advance.
Hope this e-mail could be confirmed whether it\'s correctly written.
>> Kindly check this e-mail if it\'s correctly written.
Dear professor 000,
>>
I am [Name] [이름] who took over Narae Kim of AHCI and Academia section, and became charge of Academia section.
>> I am [Name] [이름], who took over Narae Kim of AHCI and Academia section.
I appreciate for your patience of waiting the result of academia section\'s evaluation in advance.
>> I appreciate your patience of waiting for the result of the evaluation in advance.
Pro. 000\'s paper is decided as \'rejection of publication\'.
>> Pro. 000\'s paper is rejected by the publication.
We\'d like to inform that it was decision made according to \'SPACE\' academia section\'s goal and character apart from your academical achievement.
>> We would like to inform you that the decision came from the \"SPACE\" academia section\'s mission and vision apart from your academic achievements.
I hope we could meet you in SPACE academia section with another paper in the future.
Pro. 000\'s paper is decided as \'rejection of publication\'.
>> Pro. 000\'s paper is rejected by the publication.
We\'d like to inform that it was decision made according to \'SPACE\' academia section\'s goal and character apart from your academical achievement.
>> We would like to inform you that the decision came from the \"SPACE\" academia section\'s mission and vision apart from your academic achievements.
I hope we could meet you in SPACE academia section with another paper in the future.
>> I hope to receive more papers from you.
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